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Reviewer: Sweet Pea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-14-09 - 01:35 am Title: Chapter 14: Rogues

Loved the date scene!

Poor Rouge! I cannot imagine "accidentally" killing your father and then still hearing him in your head has to be torture.

Author's Response: Yeah, I tried to do something a bit darker with Rogue this time around. The poor girl's actually been halfway paranoid since the beginning of the story. I tried to depict some of the things she's heard in a earlier chapter. I don't know if anyone pick it up. But Yeah, she's had a very tragic past. Thanks for the review! ^^

Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-05-09 - 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 14: Rogues

Marie and Bobby are a riot! “An’ stop starin’ at mah butt!!!” That had me in stitches. I love the budding affection between them, even though the physical intimacy is still an obstacle. Ororo and Logan's date was cool, too: "Let's call this practice." Logan's pretty sexy in this story.

Keep this coming. You know I'm enjoying this story, and I can't wait for your updates when I see them on the Recently Added page.

Author's Response: OMG CeeCee, you don't know how much trouble this chapter was for me. There were things I originally planned for this chapter that just would not flow right. So i had to rethink a few things. Bobby and Marie are like a side-relationship in the story. Since they never really showed how they got together in the movies, it was fun hashing out how things might have started. Ro and Lo, they're always fun. And thanks for the compliment on Logan. I found that a lot of women in the Marvel world have a thing for the guy, so its always fun giving people an idea with the appeal. Enjoy these romance chapters. I think i have about one more left before things start moving again. thanks for the review hon!

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