uh oh. "The woman was hard to get out of the system. And the mansion was only so big, so they were bound to run into each other quite a few times during the course of the day. And even then he wasn’t exactly sure he wanted her out of his system. " That tells us readers a lot. Poor guy's falling for Ororo. I like that the friendship between Ororo and Kitty is there, always important in any really good Uncanny-based fic with RoLo in it. You've made me like "Marie" in movieverse, which is rare. Kitty is my other favorite.

The NC17 parts were detailed, but in a good way. Cool to see Ororo giving in so voluntarily...ahem...to Logan's advances. “Only one way to find out…” bad, bad 'Ro. I wished he'd had that chance to take his time with her.

Author's Response: Heeheehee, Thanks. I'm been trying to keep as many elements from the mainstream comics into this story without reproducing the comic stories themselves. Marie, I found to be ok in the movies but there was hardly anything done with her. So i'm trying to make her seem like a regular teen girl that's had a lot of messed up things happened to her life and she tries to deal with it all. The addition of Logan, Jubilee and Kitty into her life has helped a lot. Kitty and Ororo, i've been trying to find a good scene to put the two of them in for a while now. I'm glad you liked their small interaction. Finally our dear couple in making. Next chapter finally seals the deal on somethings. But don't forget main plot is coming back soon. Anyway thanks for the review and see ya next chapter!