OK, this has to be one of my favorite RoLo stories to date! I wish the movie was more like your story!

I'm glad you found your files because it would be a sin not to continue this story!

"That almost tickled." LOVE that. So much of this reminds me of how good the comics used to be, with dynamic action, the team's concern for each other, and just the way the story would flow. Juggernaut's AWESOME! You rock that character, did I mention that? You redeemed Scott in my eyes, too, since it's cool to see him from Logan's perspective, how he grudgingly respects him, too. Good stuff. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Heeheehee, I'm glad you liked it. Using Juggy was a lot of fun because he's just a big unstoppable thing and groups often time throw everything they have at the guy and he barely breaks a sweat. So when you have titan like that you have to get tricky with the tactics. Which is where I was trying to show where the X-Men was stronger at. All the brotherhood mutants tended to fight solo but the X-Men work together to bring them down. I was just trying to show how a family unit fighting team might work. ^^ And also I love Scott. I often found Scott and Logan to often times be cut from the same cloth. They're both proud, strong men, that live by a strict code of honor...generally speaking. The difference lies is, since Scott's the leader he often times plays big brother to everyone, where is Logan can be that irresponsible Uncle that everyone loves. Both great guys, just different roles they play.