Date: 08-18-12 - 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 6: Hard Packets
All I can say is fantastic! The family dynamic here is incredible. I could almost feel the love between Ororo and Logan coming through every word. Thank you, maybe we will see a completion to this, I can hope. A A
Date: 02-06-11 - 06:29 am Title: Chapter 6: Hard Packets
I think my cuteness quotient of the day just overloaded. Seriously, this was several levels of adorable, I suspect it's borderline illegal somewhere, some place.
I've read quite a few fics that deal with Logan and Ororo having a family - none quite capture the feeling like you do. Just. Everything was perfect, heaven help me. I have a silly grin on my face that just won't go away. :)
Date: 10-10-08 - 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 6: Hard Packets
Great story. I loved all the RoLo moments. You really captured their personalities pretty well.
I can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Thanks! I do try to give them more screen time, but the story isn't just about them. *sigh*
Date: 09-06-08 - 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 6: Hard Packets
Okay, I love the dress. I also got a kick out of the mistletoe. Makes you wonder if Kendall planted it there to distract her parents while she ran off with Stephen!!!
Author's Response: There's a drabble swimming around in my head about the mistletoe tradition in the mansion - and RoLo ha ve been keeping a winning streak on finding it first for scores of years.