[Report This]Date: 01-17-09 - 12:47 am Title: Over the Threshold
so, here I am addicted to this story too, but don't think about I forgot about the other one i desperately want you to update... what ever the title is. **snickers**
Author's Response: hee hee.
[Report This]Date: 01-16-09 - 11:12 pm Title: Over the Threshold
I'm going to stop reading new stories by you. Well I'm going to try anyway lol This is going to be in the back of my mind until the next update!
What's going to happen to 'Ro now? Is Remy going to give her a place to stay for a bit? And how does Logan fit in to all this? Ugh Cee! Just one more chapter before putting this one on hiatus! Please?? Then I'll just start bugging you for the werewolf story or one of the others lol
I absolutely love Remy so far in this btw!
Author's Response: glad you like Remy, I don't write him often with Ororo (I only have one other story where those two hook up), so it's hard to make it feel genuine or interesting. Logan will show up soon, as background noise at first. Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 01-16-09 - 03:51 pm Title: Over the Threshold
Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!
Author's Response: I don't know when the heck I'll write it! Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 01-16-09 - 07:27 am Title: Over the Threshold
Interesting chapter. A lot of good dialogue is written between Ororo and Remy, you can truly feel that the two of them are completely from two different worlds and this incident between them has really been alarming to say the least.
I'm still trying to get a feel for the direction the story will be going, but I think that's just a reflection of the fact you're having a bit of the same problem as well.
But I was thinking off-handed and I have an idea of where you can take the story, if you choose to use it. I'll email it to you. Tell me what you think.
Either way, keep writing! ^^ You gals keep giving me inspiration to keep going to.
Author's Response: thanks for sending the email. I liked your insight into my plot. I enjoyed writing the dialogue, it started off with them righteously angry at each other, then kinda diverged to them bickering.
[Report This]Date: 01-16-09 - 01:59 am Title: Over the Threshold
When I saw you'd updated this story I squealed. This became my favorite story half way through the first chapter, maybe sooner. There were so many things I liked about it, so many in fact that there were so many aspects I adored all I could manage was to type, with mouth hanging open, "Wonderful!" And it is.
It's so original and you can literally feel her down trodden state. It's refreshingly different and has so much potential. And when I read the cab driver part and saw who it was I was so curious how you'd get him into the mix as he drove off. And of course I love Remy. I'd miss this story if you don't update frequently but I know how it is having a bunch of stories to get out. Ya gotta do what's best for you and as the muse dictates.
Cee, wonderful chapter - there's that word again but it is wonderful. I still can't help hoping you update soon.
Author's Response: I don't just want to write her as a cute little orphan, handy pickpocket or street urchin. In "real life," a person might go through some of that living homelessly. There will be moer of her history soon. Glad you enjoyed this, Darlene!
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