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Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-06-09 - 01:25 pm Title: Extra Blankets

I love how you interspersed Logan into the story, like his gruff cabbie aura and adding Bella into the mix was an unexpected pleasure. This story has a kind of gritty feel to it, perhaps that should be restated to say realistic feel which I might’ve mentioned before. I’m glad to get caught up.

Author's Response: Glad you like Logan. I'm still on the fence about what to do with him. He's a cab driver, but he needs more substance and back story, that's what's eluding me right now. Bella is a character people don't use that much in fic, or at least none of the Remy fic I've read, since readers are so Rogue-centric. Gritty is actually the feel I was going for, so you can keep that word, D. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: TigerStorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-26-09 - 08:36 pm Title: Extra Blankets

I really needed to read this today... so much so that I started tearing up reading it. Even though you couldn't possibly know that... Thank you for posting this when you did.

Now that I've stopped tearing up, on to the real review.

I'm really curious to see how things are going to start up between Ororo and Logan. I'm still loving Remy... Can I have him? That scene with Bella was great lol

Author's Response: I know. I'm jonesing for some Ororo/Remy lately, Holly and I brainstormed about that last week. This will be RoLo, but it's a Remy warmup for another fic I'm planning.

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-25-09 - 10:20 pm Title: Extra Blankets

interesting interjection of Howlett, Logan J.

Author's Response: hee hee. I love dropping stuff like that into my fic.

Reviewer: NoWhere_Man Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-25-09 - 06:35 pm Title: Extra Blankets

I have to say this is becoming more interesting with every chapter. I'm interested in seeing what Remy plans to do exactly. I feel bad for Ororo because she's got a difficult position she doesn't want to be pitied upon but yet she clearly in a situation that warrants help also.

I can also see where the problems with Ororo and Remy's backgrounds will become a problem later. A few lines by Remy ruffled my feathers the wrong way. But in honestly he can't be to blame, its probably assumed that he's never had a life as hard as Ororo's so there are just things he's not going to get.

And we finally have Logan introduced to the other two.

Hate to say this hon, but MOAR!

^^

Author's Response: Remy is still learning about Ororo and how far he can go with their communicating and conflicts. He means well, but it will be a lot of work to connect with her beyond their immediate chemistry. Remy's life had its problems, but he's come a long way. He could end up back on a rocky path eventually, but I won't give up too much. Go back a chapter or two, though, and take a look at Remy's key chain. *hint* And yes, Logan will be popping up more soon.

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