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Reviewer: Naomi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-12-09 - 03:19 am Title: Walk of Shame

Oh yes, I am thoroughly enjoying this story. Remy is so sweet, I hate to see how he and Logan are gonna butt heads over the lovely Ororo.

Author's Response: Actually, the two of them butting heads is the part I'm looking forward to! Remy is sweet, he's the good guy in this story, I promise, but he isn't perfect. Logan initially seems like a jerk, too, but I'll soften him up eventually. THanks for the nice feedback.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-06-09 - 01:26 pm Title: Walk of Shame

It was the calm before the storm. Perhaps that sums this chapter up to a tee. It was relaxing, nice, revealing even when it came to Logan but certainly a calm breather. I’m curious where the NC-17 is coming in and if there’s going to be an Oreo thing going on here – think that’s what they call Ororo and Remy? A triangle perhaps? I’m just very curious to see where you’re going with this. It looks like it’s going to be a grand adventure.

Author's Response: It's definitely Oreo. I like my sticky caramel filling as much as the next person, but every now and again, I like some sweet cream in the center. I'm curious to see where I go with it, too.

Reviewer: Hetairai Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-27-09 - 08:58 pm Title: Walk of Shame

It was the calm before the storm

I'm very intrigued.

Author's Response: Now I just have to figure it out! But it will move on beyond Ororo moving in, I promise. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Roxxibebe02 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-27-09 - 01:56 am Title: Walk of Shame

Yay! Update! Its great story, I think Remy it characterized wonderfully in this story. Remy is a thief who is always able to look at people with a careful eye and him be an photographer is great.
Ororo is wonderful as always and hopefully we'll be seeing more of Logan soon.

Author's Response: Good point about Remy having a thief's eye. I wanted to take him outside of himself a little, but keep some of the mythos, such as him being charming and a good cook, and having a prior history with Belladonna. Logan will pop up.

Reviewer: Libra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-26-09 - 10:37 pm Title: Walk of Shame

I swear if this wasn't the RoLo Realm I'd want this to be an Ororo/ Remy story. I love this.

Thanks for giving me something to read at work, CeeCee.

Author's Response: I'm planning an Ororo/Remy piece for AFF when I get around to writing it. I'm glad you liked it, Cara. I miss you! I peek at your Facebook once in a while for updates. There's a few of us RoLoers out there, which you probably already knew. Talk to you later, girl. Have a good day.

Reviewer: tigerstorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-26-09 - 08:47 pm Title: Walk of Shame

Again... thanks for posting this when you did. it really turned my horrible day around.

I can't wait to see what this 'storm' is... and what Remy does with those pictures!

Author's Response: I am always glad you like my stuff, Tiger. I know you're crazy busy, and have next to no time to read fic, so I'm always flattered when you read mine!!! Remy is gonna shop around and break the ice.

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