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Reviewer: Mystiqbard Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-30-10 - 12:20 pm Title: Unpretty Behavior

Okay, so I'm story stalking ya. Looking forward to seeing how this one pans out. Great characters you've got, and equally great imagery, I feel like I'm right in it.

Author's Response: Goodie. Stop by Ororo's styling chair and hand her a bottle of water while you're there!!! *chuckle* Thanks for the stalk and the talk, Jade.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-26-10 - 01:05 am Title: Unpretty Behavior

Saw you updated recently then realized this was updated too and then realized it was Focus! This story just has a gritty, down to earth feel to it that charms. I'm not really into the modeling thing but it's something no one else has done which I always admire. The originality keeps me reading but also I am so dying to see Logan and Ororo get together. When they meet I get this really good kind of expectant feeling which I haven't had in a while when it comes to fics. Your Logan is just so good. I hope your muse strikes again and soon.

Author's Response: Hey, so sue me, I love watching the occasional epi of America's Next Top Model just to watch the girls say stupid things and to see them spazz out when they have to do weird stuff like hold tarantulas or dangle from huge heights. Other than that, I'm right there with you, D. I want Logan and Ororo together too, but she needs to build herself up instead of letting the men in her life do it for her, but Logan will be waiting in the wings, and he'll be a good man.

Reviewer: Sara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-07-10 - 12:58 pm Title: Unpretty Behavior

I love this story but I'm rooting more for Remy for Ororo than Logan, I'm afraid... :)

Author's Response: That will slowly change, I promise you. Remy isn't perfect, and there's more to Logan than he seems. Glad you're enjoying the story.

Reviewer: AshraAstarte Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-06-10 - 06:58 am Title: Unpretty Behavior

Wow, this is an awesome story! Its so modern and hot! I love the characterization of everyone and of course I love Remy & 'Ro. I hope you plan on continuing, I'll be checking for updates!
:D

Author's Response: Glad you like the characterizations, Ashra. I tried to hear them in my head and throw the dialogue out there without...well, without messing it up too badly. Sometimes what seems like a good idea in my head reads badly onscreen. I enjoy Remy and 'Ro, too, but not quite as much as RoLo. But that will be subject to question in this fic...

Reviewer: TigerStorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-20-10 - 01:25 pm Title: Unpretty Behavior

You know a model did accidentally wear a designer's dress backwards on the runway and did start a trend lol I could see 'Ro doing that.

Still can't quite see how they're going to get together, but I'll be patient :)

Author's Response: They'll start off not that impressed with each other. She'll grow to like him the more often that she sees him, because he listens to her. That's what cabbies do. ;-) The scene of her in the dress made me laugh when it popped into my head. I hate complicated clothing where it looks so nice on the hanger, but then I have to fight with it once I try it on myself.

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-19-10 - 07:23 pm Title: Unpretty Behavior

Seven and Mars? You taking stabs at Erykah now? LOL.

loved the Petey scene!

Author's Response: Those names make me laugh, that, and Macy Gray naming her kid Happy. I love Piotr, I never see him in people's fic anymore. Ever since the movies, people have pretty much ignored the poor guy. In the comics, he had a hardcore crush on 'Ro, back when Claremont was writing the early series. So I tossed him in here, even though he's only a background player.

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