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Reviewer: Delcia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-13-10 - 12:03 pm Title: Ain’t All That

So I happened to be prowling through and found this story and I have to say I LOVE it. It's so fresh - the humor and personalities of everyone in the story. I get the impression of this deeply woven tale when reading it and it feels so 'filling'. Like your really watching something, this tale, taking place right before you.

How your writing everyone is really fantastic. What's even greater is that I'm both a huge OreO fan and Rolo fan so I feel like this is a dream come true =)

Both it and your writing are exceptional. I do hope you will update again and continue this story. Once you've stumbled onto something so good you can't help but want more =)
I don't have an account but I'll certainly be checking back and forth. Good luck :D



Author's Response: Sorry I haven't replied up til now *or updated*. Thanks for the nice review and insights. I appreciate them.

Reviewer: Ashra Astarte Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-02-10 - 06:04 pm Title: Ain’t All That

Mmm-hmm that was a bangin' update! Worth the wait. Gosh, I love the cut-throat backstage of the modeling industry, in fan fic mind you =)

& gosh, I love your characterizations. You can practically feel the griminess and viciousness. & how friggin' adorable is my Remy?! * gushes* You can do it 'Ro!

Man, you can write. I'm as jealous as Callisto :D

Author's Response: Ha! Thanks! I had fun with this chapter, since it was what crossed my mind from the beginning of this fic, this was the direction I wanted it to go, with Ororo having a lot mishaps before she had any real success. And Callisto is one of my favorite villains in the X-Verse, since she is like Ororo's flip side, if she stepped too far over that line. It's fun to make her this oddball supermodel with an attitude who's hard to work with, but we'll see different sides of her character, too. Thanks for visiting.

Reviewer: Taco Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-16-10 - 01:40 am Title: Ain’t All That

Way to work it, Ro!

Author's Response: Ha! I know. I wish I could move like her. Imagining her all fierce with the fan made me grin, so I had to write it out.

Reviewer: starnoble03 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-12-10 - 03:41 pm Title: Ain’t All That

This story is really well written...

Author's Response: Thanks, Star. Likewise, by the way. I love your stories and I'm always excited when you post an update, or leave me a comment. I appreciate the visit.

Reviewer: DanielleduLys Signed [Report This]
Date: 06-08-10 - 10:38 pm Title: Ain’t All That

Oh my, I was so embarassed for Ororo! Good thing she was able to put herself together in time!

Please keep up! I really want to see where you're going with this one!

Author's Response: I wanna see where I'm going with it, too! Because I have no clue!!! :p heeheehee... Thanks for the visit!

Reviewer: Roxxi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-08-10 - 09:29 pm Title: Ain’t All That

I'm happy that you updated the story, it's a refreshing take on the characters and I can't wait for Ororo to kick Callisto's ass on the runaway. Let 'Ro show it how's it done ; )

Author's Response: I love Callisto as an antagonist; notice how I don't say villain, since she isn't the garden variety bad guy who wants to rule the world, just her own tiny corner of it, namely mutants who are freaks like her in the comics. She's fun to add into an AU, especially as a kind of beauty who isn't everyone's cup of tea, but who's memorable and who doesn't give a ***k what anyone else thinks. Ororo will want to kick her ass, but she also needs to take lessons from her.

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