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Reviewer: Kay_Sarafina Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-25-12 - 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Click

Your writing is amazing. It feels more like you're reading a novel instead of fanfic simply because the quality is so good. The characters are colourful and dynamic, complex. Seeing Ororo as this diamond in the rough supermodel in the making is so fun and interesting. The Eddie Brock cameo was neat.

Reviewer: AngelAloft Signed [Report This]
Date: 08-15-12 - 12:31 am Title: Chapter 10 - Click

Still loving this story. It was gripping when I first started reading it and it still has my attention, not such a bad thing, but I am missing the Rolo aspect of this being so far along with the story now. Hope to read more soon and really see where this is going. As always your story telling is beyond compare. A A

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