Okay. You've got to make this more emotional. To me, it's as if Storm's saying, "Okay, I got raped. I'll get over it." As if this was some casual event. Rape is not something you get over that easy. It's a traumatic event. It'll take time for her to heal. I know it's dangerous for her to give in to her emotions, but, this will have to be an exception.

Also, I don't think she'd've let Kurt take her easily. The proposal.... okay, love the idea, but... right after she's raped? Skeptical.

Okay, now my favorite character to talk about, Sabretooth. I think Storm would struggle more. Plus, there's the scream issue. I honestly don't think she'd scream when he told her to. My issue with that is it's as if she's telling him she's his. I think she would've held it in for as long as possible. Otherwise, he wins, and we all know Storm's not like that.

Overall, though, great story. Sorry if I seem critical, it's just that it didn't seem believable.