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Reviewer: carox Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-18-13 - 01:36 am Title: Sunset Rituals - One-shot

so cute

Reviewer: smalltowngirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-12-09 - 02:46 am Title: Sunset Rituals - One-shot

Aww that was so cute! I loved it and I'm glad you added on to this! It was absouletly adorable! It made me smile! - Amber

Author's Response: Aw! Thanks again, hun, for reviewing! Your comments always make me smile! :D

Reviewer: kissthis2010 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-07-09 - 02:55 am Title: Sunset Rituals - One-shot

this was completely breath taking! it was so amazing!

and there are so many stories here! i can't believe i didnt find this place earlier.

Author's Response: Aw, thanks! Yup! I'd recommend a ton of stories for you to read, but then I'd be taking up ALOT of room! lol! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Dodden Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-10-09 - 02:01 am Title: Sunset Rituals - One-shot

Wonderful one shot. I particularly liked the very vivid imagery and setting of the story. Often times it's the surroundings that give the reader the feel of the story, and yours did so very well.

Of course, the characters within are just as important, but sometimes the setting draws you into the story. Detailed and fluid are two words I would use to describe this fic. Very good work.

As for the story itself, I will reiterate what a previous reviewer said about Logan taking it slow. It's good. The setting wouldn't have felt right if something crazy happened, and the pacing of the events fit perfectly within the context of the story.

It's probably redundant to point out how the small moments are normally the ones that are weighed on the heaviest. It's easy enough to convey their relationship with a large matter of fact plot, but you conveyed their relationship with simplicity and affection, using subtleties that would sometimes go unnoticed in a large story.

Again, wonderful work. The title is more than appropriate, and the praise I give you is well earned. Plus, a thumbs up for proper grammar and punctuation. I love to read without having to reread.


Author's Response: Wow, Dodden, I'm speechless. Thank you so much for the long and kind review, it's really touching.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-23-09 - 09:25 pm Title: Sunset Rituals - One-shot

Oh, nice! I enjoyed this immensely.

Author's Response: Thanks, Darlin!

Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-08-09 - 10:17 pm Title: Sunset Rituals - One-shot

Perfect. I love Logan's empathy and how good a listener he is in this story. It's not just him venting to her for a change. Ororo's reaction is awesome at the end.

Author's Response: I'm happy you enjoyed it! Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: NoWhere_Man Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-08-09 - 12:08 pm Title: Sunset Rituals - One-shot

Another nice one-shot Rose. A lot of nice description in the opening of the story, really sets the mood. Anyway don't worry about getting back to your main story. Sometimes it's nice to get these little stories out, every once and a while.

Author's Response: Yay! Another review :D Thanks for the kind words, NoWhere_Man.

Reviewer: Alta Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-08-09 - 01:41 am Title: Sunset Rituals - One-shot

It was a good story. I like that Logan decided to take it slow. I think the idea of them always watching the sunset together is very romantic. There were some confusing parts though. In the third paragraph, you say that one of Ro's hands is supporting her chin, but then you say that "her other HANDS are cradling a cup of tea." How many hands does she have?

Author's Response: Thank you for pointing out that mistake! Yeah sometimes my fingers have a mind of their own when I type...but thanks :D I'm glad you liked it!

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