This was good. Poor Logan. Tempted professor+nightie+hot student = Big Trouble.

I'm gonna start out by saying, I like your story. You have a few grammatical errors. You start a new paragraph when a different person starts to speak. A few spelling mistakes, all in all there's nothing too bad that a good beta couldn't find.

Even dialogue is not bad. My only real issue is moral really. The whole teacher/student relationship thing, is always very touchy. Usually with stories such as these, the Author makes light of such issues because they want to get straight to the romance.

I always think that's a mistake, because it shows how strong of a character they both are if they actually fight and grieve with themselves over their feelings. Oppose to the two of them just jumping in the bed at first chance.

It makes your story seem more real not to mention it gives it more substance and depth. I mean really explore the notion. Make it more than just, Logan's on the rebound from his fight with Jean. And Ororo just sees Logan as someone a lot more mature than the other boys her age.

Anyway that's just my thoughts. See ya next chapter!

Author's Response: Wow, thanks for the input. You brought up some good points...when I think about this story and the direction it's going...I do want it to be about more then sex. Although the sexual tension cant be out right ignored...Your review reminded me of the importance of taking things slow. I knew going into it that the age difference and the stigma of Teacher/Student relationships was a sensitive situation, and might not sit well with some folks. I only hope to be respectful, but yet realistic as I go along...The grammatical errors? I'll try to be more mindful of those...if you know of any good beta readers let me know. Thanks again.

Good chapter.

Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!