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Reviewer: ROLO__LOVER1979 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-19-09 - 10:45 am Title: Where Was That Line We Crossed

Love Ro handling the Waitress

Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-13-09 - 09:16 pm Title: Where Was That Line We Crossed

There were a couple of typos (like "red" instead of "read) but this was really, really good. The whole age factor between them frustrates me, since "technically" she's still a teenager, but this is still pretty entertaining.

Author's Response: Thanks. I've gone through and made some changes. Sorry about my terrible editing skills. I just get so excited about finishing a chapter that I want to post it right away...again I'll try to get a hold on that. I’m having some difficulties of my own with the whole "teenager" thing. I mean considering that its fantasy I actually don’t have a "big" problem with whatever is budding between them (because legally she is an adult), and the fact that I love them together as a couple has a lot to do with it as well....but what gets me the most is the Teacher/student relationship...something like that doesn’t just hurt the people involved.

Reviewer: Sango2 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-13-09 - 05:07 pm Title: Where Was That Line We Crossed

Good chapter, update soon. ;)

Reviewer: Naomji Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-13-09 - 12:25 am Title: Where Was That Line We Crossed

You are writing this story beautifully. It is not an easy subject to write about and you are showing their confusion and how uncomfortable they are with the mutual attraction.

I hope you post more and more. You are tackling an issue that seems to occur alot lately but these characters have special circumstances AND they are both of legal age, which makes it very cool and still forbidden.

Keep the story going sister. I loveit.



Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the support. The last thing that I want is for this to turn into something crass. Im still waiting to see what direction it goes in...Catch you next chapter!

Reviewer: NoWhere_Man Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-12-09 - 11:38 pm Title: Where Was That Line We Crossed

Again another nice chapter. A few spelling mistakes here and there, but nothing too major. Although, I have to ask, was the Professor Summers you were referring to earlier in the chapter the same Scott Summers that was trying to date Ororo earlier in the story or another Summers? That one threw me for a loop.

I have to say, I'm interesting in what news did Ororo have. I'm guessing he decided to back out of any sort of relationship, but I wonder why? Was the prospect of her leaving for another college too much for him to even warrant an effort?

Oh well we'll see.

Author's Response: Yeah my bad, I've been reviewing some of my other fan fics and Im getting my story all mixed up...thanks for keeping me on my toes I've changed it. The spelling errors? I tried really hard this time ran spell check like 5 times,and read it over about as much...editing isnt one of my strongest areas as you can see...oh well. Like I said if you can point me in the direction of a good beta reader that would be great...if not then Im sure my spelling isnt going to get any better. Thanks for reading.

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