I didn't want to critique your work, but I was just wondering if you were in the process of putting up more chapters. I really like this story and am interested in knowing how it'll end. I implore you to keep writing for I need something entertaining to do while I'm at work:)

Author's Response: Hi rachel: Thanks for sending me this message. I AM going to update soon. I actually just got back from vacation, and prior to that I was busy with producing and directing a play. Now that, that is DONE I'm excited to get back to this story. Thanks for following. I hope to have something out before the end of the week.

man, poor Logan and Ororo. It was so funny that they meant well at first with their goodbye until they got to the door...

talk about taking one for the road.

This was great. On one hand, you almost feel sorry for Jean, but on the other hand, meh...she had her chance. I like how this is written, you give each of the characters a lot of dignity without making any of them caricatures of the innocent girl/jealous ex/confused guy triangle. Ororo's not completely innocent, Logan's not that confused and Jean's jealousy isn't completely unjustified. The Professor's the only one keeping a level head!