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Reviewer: freebird Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-20-09 - 07:28 pm Title: Storms

i just read your story and i cant for the next chapter!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-18-09 - 09:12 pm Title: Storms

Wait, where did Kuhio go? He's still out there waiting for the right moment to get to Storm!

Author's Response: OH, no the kids got him! Just wait!

Reviewer: Sango2 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-15-09 - 09:10 pm Title: Storms

Love it, update soon. ;)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try!

Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-14-09 - 04:11 pm Title: Storms

dang. I hope Logan tears his ass up.

this was well plotted. only small nitpick is that Kitty doesn't morph, she phases. other than that, this was pretty fun to read.

Author's Response: Ok, I'll change that! Thanks for pointing that out! I'm not an expert so I'm glad I've got readers to help!

Reviewer: Pamdill Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-11-09 - 07:02 pm Title: Storms

Enjoying the story waiting to see where it goes to next

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: lamisi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-10-09 - 11:38 pm Title: Storms

i loved the first chapter...however, this one is even better! keep writing please.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm going out of town this week so it wont be for another week or so.

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