Date: 03-28-11 - 09:13 pm Title: Feelings
Okay, Google translator isn't the best I realize, but here's a rusty translation of Storm and that other's guys conversation in order from "Feeling it.." to "You won't..."
"Hisia sasa, bitch?"
"Kupoteza kudhibiti?"
"Kamwe."
"Kama tulikuwa mahali popote, basi bila ya kufa."
"Wewe si kutolewa hali ya hewa juu yangu?"
Really nice Story. I definitely enjoyed it.
Date: 04-02-10 - 09:38 am Title: Feelings
I can see these events and their slowly building relationship after Alcatraz. It seems within character and it's an interesting take that the man who raped Storm would come back for revenge. Of course it's fun seeing Wolverine all protective. I'd love to see the relationship develop even more in the coming chapters. I see you haven't updated in some time so I hope you haven't abandoned this fic. Please continue!
Date: 10-16-09 - 05:33 am Title: Feelings
**hope
sorry, type-o. lol.
Date: 10-16-09 - 05:32 am Title: Feelings
WOW! that is all i can say! i really really really love this story! hoe you update soon! can't wait!
Date: 08-18-09 - 12:56 am Title: Feelings
Great update! Took you long enough, just kidding! I loved it, you are a great writer and I am enjoying this fic. I meant to leave you a review earlier, but I kind of got sidetracked! Anyway, awesome job!- Amber
Author's Response: Itscool. And I realize it's been a while since I've updated, but I've been going through some stuff so I promise to get back on track with writing! Its people like you that encourage me! Thanks so much :D