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Reviewer: Digital Tempest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-06-09 - 05:25 am Title: Past is Present.....

Heh. Have to get to work in the morning. Can't stay up all night reading fic sadly. :-) I'm loving what I've read thus far from you, and I'll be sure to leave you another review when I get to finish the rest of the chapters!

Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-08-09 - 01:15 am Title: Past is Present.....

small boo boo on my part.

right after this line, there is an end tag missing.

You tell me 'what does it mean'.

there should be an italic end tag at the end of that line, so that the rest of the text in the story doesn't end up in italics. I will email you about that soon.

In the meantime, great chapter!

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