This is really, really, really good! I almost don't want to say anything more than that because that says it all but hey, I'm not built that way, I can't stop myself from rambling.

I love how you made this all work together, it's so believable, paced beautifully and the sex - omigosh! - just written very well. It wasn't anything over the top, not graphic at all but really rather beautiful and a little pitiful for Logan but in a realistic, human way. I LOVED it and I don't really read stories with sex in them.

I love that it's not a relationship and yet it's obvious that it should be. I love that Logan wants her and I love her standoffishness. Best story I've read all night and the best in a very long time!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you! Reviews such as yours make it all worth it. I've never been complimented on my sex writing before, yipee! Sex scenes are hard for me to write. I always struggle with wanting to make it real but not porn. Thank ya!

I don't know what it is about your stories, but they suck me right in. You make Ororo stronger and more jaded than most writers, which I love, and Logan has this hint of uncertainty in this that makes him more likable. I loved your stuff that you put out on Livejournal a while back, too. Hope you'll keep posting there or here. Kitty's one of my favorite characters, so I hope there will be more of her in this story.

Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate the review! I had no idea that this site existed until very recently. I actually think that Logan, esp. movieverse Logan, is kind of a big romantic. He's always falling in love. Poor guy.