[Report This]Date: 12-29-09 - 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 3
Okay. This is probably the third or fourth time I've said this, but man, I wish I could write like you!
I love the subtle bits of humor, particularly the scene with Rogue at Walmart. You're one of the only writers I've seen giving the teen characters mundane jobs and normal lives outside of being a mutant. I also love the additions of characters like Jubilee and Danielle, since I'm more of a comic buff than movie fan.
The line about men only caring that the underwear came off was genius.
Can't wait to see the outcome of who Warren's boinking, too. Yes, I know this is RoLo, but I love interactions between background characters, too.
Author's Response: Thanks! I like fics where nothing big happens, and I like ensemble type fics. So that's why I've decided to write these things. I appreciate your reviews! They always make me want to update faster.
[Report This]Date: 12-29-09 - 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 3
I'm going to have to second Voli here, every chapter is a new treat! Well written, both grammatically and creatively. Little to no typos and a great flow and exposition of characters. A very very good read. Thank you for that.
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 12-29-09 - 06:35 am Title: Chapter 3
Wow! This story gets better with every chapter!!!! Not that I care about Rouge at all, but I just don't have her figured out in this story. She seems plain plain plain. lol! No biggie. I love seeing more of Logan's pov for once!
Keep up the great work and update asap! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I think Rogue has senioritis. (LOL I know I did at that age ...)
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