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Reviewer: QTFic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-11-11 - 02:10 am Title: Chapter 4

I have enjoyed thi story every much. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: bee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-05-10 - 11:35 am Title: Chapter 4

"Oh!" was my reaction to this whole piece, and I do mean that in the best way imaginable. This felt very real! I like that you kept things very simple, and yet not. It was easy to read because you didn't use any over-the-top or descriptive lines or anything, and somehow the emotion that spilled over was very *real*. Well-written, and worth reading again! :)

Reviewer: mystiqbard Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-09-10 - 12:37 am Title: Chapter 4

I must admit, I'm not a huge fan of Marie/Rogue. Dunno why, but I guess the movies just didn't flesh her out enough for me. I do like the comic Rogue, still to a far lesser extent than Storm, but it could still be for the same reason. I like how you've written her through this story. She's been warming up to me and for one of the first times, she feels 'human' to me (meh, human, mutant, it's all the same) :) Another well written chapter, which is always difficult to do with such an ensemble character list. Two thumbs up

Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-02-10 - 02:10 am Title: Chapter 4

this was so well done. I love the realism of them dropping off Rogue at college, even though for me it's been almost two decades ago *well, eighteen years* The Walmart comforter and plastic drawers tickled me.

Thanks for solving the Peter/Warren mystery. They make a neat couple, no one ever gives those two that relationship, and it was a nice change. The love scene was brief and understated, not a bad thing, and I liked that Logan's toes curled, for some reason. That's a cute trait in a guy!

I love your stories anyway, I think this is my favorite so far.

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