At first i was a little confused but it soon made sense that there were alternate Logan's or an alternate world, or someone is just messin' with them. I'm interested in your next update and learning more.

PS, so glad you're returned! ;)

Author's Response: rhap attack! thank you, for both the review and the welcome back! good to have another familiar author around, and a very good one at that. p.s glad to be back

I had to read these chapters separately because I kept getting interrupted, but I'm so glad I checked for an update today. I really enjoyed this. Really.

There's just such deep, mind-boggling storytelling here. Two completely different Ororo's, both treated with a lot of consideration in how they are written. You can tell that you took a lot of time to craft them both, in a sense, both sides of her character that we sometimes see in the comics. You want to see Logan returned to the Ororo who is in love with him, but at the same time, you want to see him fix the mess with the one who believes wronged her and ruined her life.

Good stuff.

Author's Response: thank you cee. always great to get a review from you, lets me know what i'm doing right, or wrong. and i'm happy to hear that a sense of fluency is recognized in the writing, since the story itself is quite easy to confuse people out of interest with.