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Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-03-10 - 12:40 am Title: And then, there was light...

nooooooooo. damn cliffhangers.

Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-02-10 - 07:59 pm Title: And then, there was light...

AHA! I knew something was up!!!

I can't wait til you update this!!! I love the teen characterizations and conversation, what comic buffs haven't had arguments like that? Kitty and Jubilee really called those boys on their tendency to think with their small heads. Ororo walking in on that note, too, was classic.

This is just well written and fun. Definitely a story that I watch out for when I come here.

Reviewer: dragongigi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-02-10 - 04:29 pm Title: Introductions are in order

wow. great story. can wait for the next chapter. Which is the real reality?

Author's Response: that's a fine question gigi ;)

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-02-10 - 02:35 pm Title: Introductions are in order

At first i was a little confused but it soon made sense that there were alternate Logan's or an alternate world, or someone is just messin' with them. I'm interested in your next update and learning more.

PS, so glad you're returned! ;)

Author's Response: rhap attack! thank you, for both the review and the welcome back! good to have another familiar author around, and a very good one at that. p.s glad to be back

Reviewer: Naomi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-31-09 - 03:25 am Title: Introductions are in order

Dang this story is confusing yet too tempting to stop reading. I'm loving it and you are writing it beautifully.

Author's Response: i'm considering that a promise since i've got a few more tricks up my sleeve naomi! and thank you for the review.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-31-09 - 02:30 am Title: Introductions are in order

I had to read these chapters separately because I kept getting interrupted, but I'm so glad I checked for an update today. I really enjoyed this. Really.

There's just such deep, mind-boggling storytelling here. Two completely different Ororo's, both treated with a lot of consideration in how they are written. You can tell that you took a lot of time to craft them both, in a sense, both sides of her character that we sometimes see in the comics. You want to see Logan returned to the Ororo who is in love with him, but at the same time, you want to see him fix the mess with the one who believes wronged her and ruined her life.

Good stuff.

Author's Response: thank you cee. always great to get a review from you, lets me know what i'm doing right, or wrong. and i'm happy to hear that a sense of fluency is recognized in the writing, since the story itself is quite easy to confuse people out of interest with.

Reviewer: snickers1441 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-30-09 - 04:33 am Title: Introductions are in order

you really got me guessing cause I'm so far gone in this story that it's not even funny.

Author's Response: hehe, that's my intent, but you're still interested i hope. next chapter is sure to answer a few questions... though it'll pose more :)

Reviewer: snickers1441 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-28-09 - 08:38 pm Title: Home is where the heart is...

Ok you got me cause I'm sitting here like WTF is going on with Ororo!

Reviewer: Naomi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-28-09 - 08:01 pm Title: Home is where the heart is...

Oh shiz! What the heck just happened? I was all into the getting to know and reconnecting, but dang! I'm intrigued for sure as to where this story will lead us. Great job!

Reviewer: natad Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-28-09 - 03:14 am Title: Home is where the heart is...

oh.my.god........please, for the love of all that is RoLo....continue.

Author's Response: lol. i'll take that as a very big compliment, and don't worry, i most definitely will :)

Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-26-09 - 09:20 pm Title: And then, there was light...

the Mystiqbard is BACK.

Wow. That's the best reaction I've got to this. This is the kind of fic I love anyway, with 'Ro coming across as gutsy, strong in a quiet way, capable, and very knowing. I love their muted conversations and how she handled his moods as though they were an old married couple.

I hope you'll add on to this; of course, the last time I told you that, I never saw an update from you again for, oh, what, two, three years??? I know, you are a real person with a real life, but you're still one of my favorite authors. Thanks for giving us this wonderful, intelligently written fic.

Author's Response: Cee! It has been a day and an age since I wrote, or even perused the world of fan fiction, been traveling for those years and didn't really have a chance to sit down and write again. Moved back to my home country and now have more opportunity. Thank you so much for the review, and the support. But this fic will have a defintie finish soon. Thank you again

Reviewer: Sango2 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-26-09 - 02:31 pm Title: And then, there was light...

OK, love it. You got to continue. ;)

Author's Response: Already on it, thank you

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