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Reviewer: bee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-16-11 - 08:01 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh, this is fantastic. Hilarious, but very sweet at the same time. There are so many of the kids that it's hard to keep track of them all, but you have distinct personalities pinned to them so it's not so bad. Baby Kendall is also very cute, O-m-g! :D Considering you posted to this site, I hope we can assume we know what direction Ro and Logan are gonna go. (yay for potentially awkward and funny romance?)

Update soon, please and thanks!!

Author's Response: lolol yeah I know there are so many kids, that's how many he's got... we're still missing one that's gonna be a lot of fun for Logan... he'll be showin' up in the next couple of chapters. Gonna focus a little on the ones already here, so they won't be so confusing to you; try to flesh them out a bit more so you'll recognize them at once. I'm glad you like this one so far - the holidays and a major snow storm blitzed us so I'm behind in my fic updating. Stay tuned for more soon and thank you for the feedback! It's appreciated. - W6C

Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-07-10 - 05:20 am Title: Chapter 1

Very cute. I love Ororo's reaction. "Pardon?" I'm smiling as I picture 'Ro with the baby girl, cooing at her and playing with her. And Daken was a riot! I like your version better than Marvel's.

Author's Response: Thanks Cee :) I think they could've found a renewed journey for Logan if they'd allowed him to truly team up and guide his son in the ways of their own natures and trying to fit in and do what's right. The whole "I want to kill my father" focus is really old. I think Daken, teamed up with Scotty, are going to give Logan a few concerns along with quite a few chuckles. Same with Ororo, she deserved to experience the maternal bonding with a young child instead of meeting a teenaged version of Kendall. Elektra is a different story and I can't wait to see what Rina reveals to our versions of her mom and dad about her versions of her mom and dad. lolol I'm glad you read this little story. I'm taking it slow and sure to be sure nothing about it gets rushed. I think our team gets rushed into things way too often (by Marvel) and then it's too difficult to retro later. Thanks for the feedback Cee. It's always appreciated. - W6C

Reviewer: PAMDILL Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-29-10 - 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh, this is going to be so funny!

Author's Response: :) I'm glad you think so cuz that's what I'm workin' toward. I have a few humorous - and hopefully - chuckle worthy moments planned for Logan and the kids... with the rest of the X-Men hangin' on for the ride. They've been very supportive so far... have to admit I'm enjoyin' the banter between Logan an' Scott too. Hadn't expected that when I started. Thanks for the feedback, Pamdill! - W6C

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-28-10 - 03:10 am Title: Chapter 1

How cute is this? Awesome. And boy, did Logan get around lol I'm surprise no child with Jean

Author's Response: Thanks Kathy, I'm glad you enjoyed the first part. I have some fun little adventures in parenting for our favorite feral. I hope some get a chuckle out of you. :) As for Jean, to the best of my knowledge they never got together until recently in the newest book. Except in AoA and I don't think events in AoA were ripe for thinking about having a family together. Which is fine with me. lol Thanks for the feedback, it's nice to know people are still reading RoLo :) -W6C

Reviewer: akrilus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-27-10 - 09:38 am Title: Chapter 1

nice job dude that was a great read keep it coming

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. More is comin'. - W6C

Reviewer: AngelAloft Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-26-10 - 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow! All I can say is you have a vivid imagination. There's a lot going on with all of his children appearing. You're writing it in a very interesting way, unlike the comics. Looking forward to reading the relationship development between Logan and Ororo. Liking it thus far.

Author's Response: Thanks Angel, This idea came to me after the introduction of Daken in the comics. Just got tired of "all of his children" wanting him dead. He doesn't even know most of them exist, why is he always being held responsible? So I thought it'd be nice to see Logan actually have the chance to do right by his children. I thank the ladies who have given me stories for the "kid stuff" you'll be seeing here. Thanks for reading my newest fic and for the feedback. I really appreciate it. - W6C

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