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Reviewer: JamesGirl0512 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-10-13 - 08:51 am Title: Chapter 4

Really enjoying this story W6C!

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed [Report This]
Date: 03-23-13 - 06:06 am Title: Chapter 4

Hudson is a mess. Definitely a toddling boy from the descriptions. My two boys kept me hopping with their speed, but my daughter was the one who had all the cunning when it came to getting past child locks and dumping out entire bottles of cough medicine. She could unscrew the battery covers of her favorite toys with a screwdriver by the time she was two. TWO.

Ororo's quiet reactions to Logan are funny and familiar. I love Hank and the stethoscope. Dratted, blasted enhanced senses for the two hairy ferals! The little details of what everyone is doing in the background of each scene makes them feel more authentic and tangible.

I think SpaghettiOs are one of the world's most vile substances, right up there with oysters, liver and bile, but their presence in this story still made me nod my head.

Author's Response: He's a mess? lol I'm hoping Ororo's reactions come across as familiar.... and funny. She's enjoying the entire ordeal. Yeah, poor Hank and those infernal senses. lol Spaghetti O's aren't vile. lol Especially when you're a tiny tot. *grins* Thanks for readin' my story, Cee... and for commenting on it. I always enjoy hearin' from you. - W6C

Reviewer: QTFic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-19-13 - 04:45 pm Title: Chapter 4

I'm glad Logan is adapting so well to fatherhood, but he needs to man up and talk to Ororo. Also I'm wondering of they are getting any closer to finding a solution to getting these little ones home.

Author's Response: Were they supposed to be focusing on getting them home? *grins* Logan and Ororo will be having a heart to heart soon... I can feel it. - W6C

Reviewer: AngelAloft Signed [Report This]
Date: 01-12-13 - 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 4

Okay I'm using a different browser. W6C, this is just too entertaining. This little guy has just captured my heart. I'm loving his character. I hope he gives Logan hell. (evil I know) lol. Just one question who is his mother, don't tell me it's Heather. Please, please post more as soon as you can, you have been missed. A A

Author's Response: Hi Angel! I'm glad you're liking the story. And I'm glad we figured out how to access it with Pari's help *grins* I've fashioned li'l Hudson after a friend's small grandson... what a hoot he is. I just love the li'l guy. Baby Hudson's mother is not Heather Hudson though... it's Elektra. He's the brother of Rina who is already in the story, just from a different AU. In the comics Hudson grows up to have thick grey fur much like the Wendigo... never really liked that look... so I decided in this AU, Baby Hudson simply has his father's fangs so far. As far as giving Logan hell. LOLOL... you haven't seen anything yet. lolol Thanks for the review. I really appreciate it. Workin' on next part now. W6C

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