You have done an excellent job of integrating Hawk into the story thus far. Looking forward to seeing how you turn this to a rolo relationship.

Author's Response: Thanks. The RoLo is coming up. In the novel, it shows just a bit more... Kriff I took the book upstairs. Well, I believe it was pgs 169, 179 and 301 where it showed the most. I also would suggest the epilogue, that's pretty good to.