Loving it!!!! Said as I am pouncing in my seat. :) I have missed the way you write flowing conversation between your characters. I know fill ins for actions, places etc. has to be added in, but I do so love a continual conversation flow. And to have the reversal of character relationship is brilliant. There is a particular story I love where Ororo is married to Scott, but he has died, leaving her to raise their two sons and a baby on the way. Can't think of the title at the moment, but I think utilizing him in connection to Storm is great. She has gotten the short end of the attention spectrum as far as I am concerned. Anyway I appreciate how you have not had to villanize Jean for Ororo to shine. Ok I know I'm long winded, just excited to see you writing RoLo again.