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Reviewer: Sara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-10-11 - 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 1

I love this story so much!! Please continue!

Author's Response: So happy you love it Sara, stay tuned more to come.

Reviewer: elise50 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06-08-11 - 06:35 am Title: Chapter 1

I'm not sure if I ever read the original, but I do love this. Though I do feel a little bad for Forge, Ororo and Logan are just too amazing together. I definitely love the way Ororo is just as carnal as Logan.

Can't wait to see where the rest of the story's headed :)

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing elise. I didn't want to dog Forge out too badly in this version, though now that I think about it I didn't dog him out at all in the other version...lol, but anyone who stands in the way of my RoLo will have to get some kind of smack down *evil grin*.

Reviewer: AngelAloft Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-07-11 - 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ok, had a rough night, this insomnia is kicking my butt, but so is this story. I am simply loving the relationship you have written with Ororo and Logan. Forge has really been tamed down in this rewrite, which is undoubtedly a good thing for him. So happy to see this story, and with an update already no less. Lovin' it.

Author's Response: I too love their relationship, I even find that when I am re-reading during my proofreads I swoon at some of the stuff I wrote. I honestly don't pay much attention as I am in the moment/motion of writing. But at times I'll go back and read it and be like 'damn that's good'. :)

Reviewer: trina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-07-11 - 11:20 am Title: Chapter 1

I love the story and can't wait to see what happens next. Good story so far.

Author's Response: Happy you like it so far Trina. I hope I can continue it in a manner that you will still enjoy.

Reviewer: Victoria Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-07-11 - 06:54 am Title: Chapter 1

Whoo just excellent all the way around thank you soo much for this wonderful revision just bravo bravo!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks Victoria, glad you are enjoying it!!

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