Date: 06-25-14 - 10:31 am Title: In the Beginning...
Love this story!! Please update soon!!!!
Date: 06-12-10 - 02:43 pm Title: In the Beginning...
Oy, I had written a longer review but it got deleted and you know how that goes. Anyway, I haven't been in fandom in a while and thought I'd stop by to see this new fic by you. Technically not new because of all the chappies, but new for me. I love it. I thought you weren't writing as well. But it's good to see your work out there. I have to say this was brilliant. You always had a good command of the characters and this fic shows that. Normally we see writings putting the mutants, since they are mutants in perilous situations because of super villain's while us normally people have to contend with car crashes or plane crashes or slipping in the tub and stuff like that. I liked you brought to light something "normal" as dangerous to them. If the Friends of Humanity were real, I'd have them read this. Mutants too can die from a car accident (luckily Storm's not dead). Anyway, I'm back in fandom and I'll be tracking this fic. Great job.
Date: 11-07-09 - 05:29 pm Title: In the Beginning...
Yes she awake
Date: 12-23-05 - 09:55 pm Title: In the Beginning...
This is a very sad and guilt riden story and you don't know who is right and who is wrong?
Date: 12-01-03 - 01:05 am Title: In the Beginning...
I love your stories they rock! They should make this side of Ororo in the movies. Keep goin with this but don't take too long i can't wait to read the next chapter.
Date: 11-30-03 - 09:53 am Title: In the Beginning...
Okay do not leave this story for too long now okay? it was a really good chapter and really like this side of Ororo
Date: 10-17-03 - 02:08 am Title: In the Beginning...
Omg!! You ended it there?!?! What is wrong with you?!! More!! This is sad...and great....like always!! UPDATE!!!
Date: 10-17-03 - 01:59 am Title: In the Beginning...
Hey cool story, but you know I am mad anyway. Didn't think that would happen to Ororo, I totally agree with tiger, hope she gets better.
Date: 10-17-03 - 12:33 am Title: In the Beginning...
God I can't believe that happened to Ororo. She's suppose to be the indestuctable Goddess. I guess even though she is a goddess, she's one that can get hurt. I hope the team won't treat her as if she is so fragile and be too protective, that it's annoying. I hope that this makes them think more highly of her, and think that she is stronger than they thought she was.
Date: 10-16-03 - 11:00 pm Title: In the Beginning...
Excellent beginning. This really had my butt glued to the seat. Update soon! :)
Date: 10-16-03 - 08:59 pm Title: In the Beginning...
yeah I'm being lazy and not logging in. You know I love it!!! lol