This is hilarious! Man, I can remember writing silly notes like that to my friends back in elementary school. Wow. That took me back.

I identify w/ Ororo on that first letter. When I only had "beestings", I wanted more. Then when I finally blossomed, I didn't want them. *sigh* Poor 'Ro. She'll probably blossom overnight like so many other girls and be the talk of the party. LOL!

Ah, Digital Tempest what can I say? I just read this story today and about half way through it I just had to pause and let the simplicity and freshness and sheer excellence of it seep into my stunned mind. After finishing it I had to read it again. It was that good. The characters all act as they should at their young age, teasing and curious all at the same time. The way you had Scott and Bishop teasing the 'twins' was a riot and it's just what silly boys do! LOL! You've captured all of their personalities superbly. It was also nice to see you'd added Maggott and Rory. Who thinks to add Rory and poor Japheth to a story nowadays? I think I liked this story so much because it rang so true and brought me back to my own summers at that age thinking about boys and still being innocent. Maybe that's how best to describe this story. It's full of innocence and that's what makes it so powerful. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. and I hope you update soon! I'm glad I can still find your RoLo stories and thankful for Pari and this site so I have the privilege and enjoyment of still reading your excellent work. Now as stupendous as this story is please don't forget Ororo Munroe, Vampire Hunter! You know how I felt about that story when you were posting on fanfiction.net and the horror I felt when I thought you'd abandoned it! :D I did not mean to write my own little book here but your story really left a strong impression on me and, hey, you're the first review I've given for a story on this site!

That is so cute. And the part about how you get pregnant is priceless. Please update soon =)

That was so freakin funny...I was laughing til my sides started hurting...Hurry up and update this please, I'm begging you:)

Absolutely loved this first chapter. Can't wait for the rest of the story. And I have to say, I rarely laugh outright at something funny in a fic but the 'curtains' 'carpet' comment had me in fits!!Loved it!

so cute! Ro as a tomboy? I love it! and the carpet/curtains question was great lol Update soon!!!!