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Reviewer: Lyger Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-19-06 - 05:46 am Title: Deception

I don't like it when Logan and Ororo are not a happy couple. And i hate it when Jean is part of the reason they are not being happy together.And now they will not be together ever again.

Reviewer: Mystic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-23-03 - 04:00 am Title: Deception

First of all I am loving this story. Second could Scott first humiliate Jean in front of the whole school and divorce her sorry ass. Then can Ororo kick Jean's ass up and down some railroad tracks. And after Jean has been throughly humiliated and thrown into a mental hospital for i don't know seven houndred years, can she die of something simple like gain green. Please pretty pretty please. This bitch needs to die. Then Logan can grovel for years and be incrediable towards Ororo and she forgives him but not after giving him some grief about it. Then they get married and have kids. Please. I am not trying to tell you how to write your story but I only ask of one thing, KILL THE BITCH JEAN. Tootals

Reviewer: WeatherWitch Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-21-03 - 04:00 am Title: Deception

Oh My, that was so good, update this soon please. I am curious to know what excuse Logan has and if Oror will ever forgive him, Very good. Please hurry:) OWW

Reviewer: Pari Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-18-03 - 04:00 am Title: Deception

Ororo should kick Jean's ASS!!!!! Oh my God what a BITCH!!! Yeah Logan was a dog too, but jean...she's like Ororo's freakin sister:( BITCH!! Oh I love this Need More So PLEASE!!! Pari

Reviewer: Neophyte Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-28-03 - 04:00 am Title: Deception

Wow. Ro needs to put a bolt of lightning in that bitches ass. She don't know who she messing with.....as for Logan......take about things that make you go hmmmmm! Can't wait for the next chapter.

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