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Reviewer: Linda Gagne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-18-09 - 06:48 pm Title: After the Mission

I love this part 1
I can feel everything...You do a great job in description... very sensual the bath with the candles setting the mood...mmm him washing her, playing with the nipples and wrapping her arms around his legs playing with his hair as she feels his arousal in her lower back..... Yes this is very very sensual
good job *winks*

Author's Response: Thanks Linda, I appreciate your wonderful critique and your thoughts on part 1. I'm glad you enjoyed it all. - W6C

Reviewer: Cecelia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-01-07 - 05:28 am Title: After the Mission

I think I already reviewed this.

Or not...

Tastefully done. I like the love in it, as usual, radiating out of both of them.

Author's Response: Thank you Cecelia. I do try to always be tasteful an' I hope I never miss that mark. The love an' passion they feel for one another, and the expression of that love is always my main focus. I appreciate you takin' the time to let me know that it worked for you. --- W6C

Reviewer: Blue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-24-04 - 05:31 pm Title: After the Mission

Right when it was getting exciting, you go and cut it off. You have got to update!

Author's Response: Just so ya' know... I updated. Chapter 2 is up and Ch. 3 is on it's way. --- W6C

Reviewer: ToughSpirit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-18-03 - 12:20 pm Title: After the Mission

Pari you are right! W6C, you better finish this fic! Actually you better finish all your fics! Still love you though.

Author's Response: I will. And I know ya' do. *smile* Thanks. ---W6C

Reviewer: Neophyte Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-18-03 - 10:40 am Title: After the Mission

Yes of course you should continue, what kind of crazy question is that, huh?! I am with the others, all manner of torture will be done to your person if'n you don't continue.

Author's Response: *salutes* I said "I'm on it." I DID say that. Okay I'm goin'. Geez. ---W6C

Reviewer: Sara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-18-03 - 10:26 am Title: After the Mission

I've got the ropes and torches, Pari. I'm wit you girl. So you had better do like the lady says w6c>:( You do have a way of write that gets me wet...I mean...waiting for more:D I'm gonna be checking back here everyday for updates, plz don't disaapoint me;) Sara Alice

Author's Response: Yikes! Ropes an' torches...? Yes'm. I'm on it, really. But I got other fics in the works too, so..... yer gonna check EVERY day? Oooo. hmmm. Guess I better get the next part out huh? Okay. ---W6C

Reviewer: Pari Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-18-03 - 10:24 am Title: After the Mission

If you stop I will rally up a lench mob, and hunt you down:( You better continue, Goddess we have enough ppl here that are in the cliffhanger Gang, myself being the leader:D we don't need no more members, now get ta posting the rest:) That was hot and just how it is in 'my' dreams;) Please go on and fast. Pari

Author's Response: HA!! First time I ever heard you say "faster".... oh wait, no that's not true. lololololol And it was judged on another group that I am the "Master of Cliffhangers" so back off , Pari. *sticks out tongue* lololololol --- W6C

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