Date: 01-21-06 - 07:29 am Title: Chapter.4.
Something is wrong with Ororo she is acting strange and has lied to Logan and it caused them to have a fight and Ororo has left the cottage. Logan knows she was with the stranger they met on the path.
Date: 03-16-04 - 05:34 pm Title: Chapter.4.
I personally have HUGE problem with this creepy guy being anywhere near Supa Ro Lovah... It's like Logan needs like a Lo-Jack on her to beep whenever anyone inappropriate even looks at her. Show of hands of the readers who just wants Mariko to fast forward to the part when Logan kicks this guy's ass...
Date: 02-20-04 - 05:11 pm Title: Chapter.4.
Majorly good story.
Date: 02-20-04 - 01:26 pm Title: Chapter.4.
(Yells)Why did Logan let her walk alone?! She's acting freaky and he better keep an eye on her. Killing update.
Date: 02-19-04 - 07:48 pm Title: Chapter.4.
Okay, so now the only thing I'm thinking is "Logan do not let Ororo go out by herself". I just know something bad is about to happen, and at the same time I cannot wait to see what exactly it is. Do I really need to say it? No, but I will anyway for good measure...I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY!!! You are one heck of a writer!!!
Date: 02-19-04 - 06:25 pm Title: Chapter.4.
You can never do wrong, all your stories rule. Okay, I hate this other guy already since he's making trouble for Logan and Ororo. Is the guy obsessed and in love with her> That would be kind of spooky, yet cool if it was.
Date: 02-19-04 - 06:05 pm Title: Chapter.4.
Ugh, creepy guy. Nice moody appeal to the story.
Date: 02-19-04 - 05:52 pm Title: Chapter.4.
Uh oh. Trouble in the relationship. What did that weirdo Branloch do to Ororo? And what about the Lord does the townspeople know but aren't sharing? The suspense is killer!!! =D
Date: 02-19-04 - 06:27 am Title: Chapter.4.
Getting more and more interesting. I want to know what exactly is happening to Ororo.