Date: 06-19-04 - 09:38 pm Title: Chapter.6.
I bow to you, you are my absolute favorite author. Damn, this was good!
Date: 06-14-04 - 12:59 pm Title: Chapter.6.
It amazes me how you were able to capture the complicated fantastical values of the action. It's easy to throw together a combat action point-and-shoot (well, okay not really) but to integrate all the constant motion and shape shifting is quite daunting... and you did a really great job. Captured Logan fury and action very realistically as well. Losing Jude... Well, that was sad. Unfortunately, to highlight how dangerous the whole atmosphere... It must be hard to kill off a character you've been putting life to and perhaps even liked. I liked him. Damn, we lost Jude. Great job.
Date: 06-12-04 - 01:58 am Title: Chapter.6.
This is just getting more and more interesting, with each chapter. I wonder what's going to happen to Ororo. Update A.S.A.P.
Date: 06-11-04 - 07:03 am Title: Chapter.6.
Mariko I was just so happy to see you updated. I was really in the mood for some good vampire action (been watching Underworld all day) and you definately never disappoint. You are one heck of a storyteller.
Date: 06-11-04 - 02:13 am Title: Chapter.6.
yay! im the first... lol... GREAT GREAT GREAT!!!!! two thumbs up! you are an absolutely amazing writer.... its so intense keep it coming!!!!