Simply beautiful. You are consistently outdoing yourself with each chapter of each story you update. The descriptions and action are very moving and effective. You have a gift for detailing action and movement. You mention momentum and highlight visually the straining of triceps... you put a lot of time and patience into them and are very effective in transferring the movie from your imagination into ours. The shift in perspective from Ororo to Logan was not at all jarring. You also show a very good sense of the whole mechanisms of the creatures involved - completely forgot that Loganwould have to purge the poison from him. That detail I would have missed. Top notch! You are upping the stakes here! You are compelling me to update, myself! Please do keep yours coming, though. If you need time between, please do take it, especially if the results are as beautiful as this chapter was!

Holy Hell! You updated! *FanGirl SQUEEE!!* brb!

I bow to you, you are my absolute favorite author. Damn, this was good!

It amazes me how you were able to capture the complicated fantastical values of the action. It's easy to throw together a combat action point-and-shoot (well, okay not really) but to integrate all the constant motion and shape shifting is quite daunting... and you did a really great job. Captured Logan fury and action very realistically as well. Losing Jude... Well, that was sad. Unfortunately, to highlight how dangerous the whole atmosphere... It must be hard to kill off a character you've been putting life to and perhaps even liked. I liked him. Damn, we lost Jude. Great job.

Mariko I was just so happy to see you updated. I was really in the mood for some good vampire action (been watching Underworld all day) and you definately never disappoint. You are one heck of a storyteller.

Yes, this was definately worth the wait. I am really happy to see an update for this story, because boy did I miss it...and this chapter had me on the edge of my seat!!! And now I'll be a good little girl, and wait patiently for the next chapter ;-D

Oh sh*t! Ororo got bit! Very well done, I'm so happy you updated finally, I was begining to wonder what happened to you, LOL. Oh, and yes it was well worth the wait.