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Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-23-07 - 05:45 pm Title: Five

Ah! Well, I'm back from vacation where I had a chance to read your story without interruptions. I'm glad I waited. And hey, you're very welcome I'm glad a few urgings of mine helped get this chapter up!

Now here's what I thought: the tension in the story was so thick, as if you could reach out and actually experience it. I felt torn here, partially wanting David to show he had some balls despite knowing he'd lose said balls if he did so, I liked how he ended up trying at least, and then with Logan going nuts I kept wondering what was N'dare going to go back home with. It was a fascinating read. I especially enjoyed the ending where we had some Ororo and Logan time, very nice. Now I need that promised update though - hint, hint. ;D

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-13-07 - 11:18 pm Title: Five

Great chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-06-07 - 09:33 pm Title: Five

Very lyrically written. I like the flow but at the moment ...yup confused.

Author's Response: Heh. Thank you for letting me know. I know there's a lot going on, and from many of the comments, I get a sense that many people are confused. I know I was being intentionally vague in the very beginning, but now I'm wondering if I'm doing this all wrong. And evident;y the two days didn't happen and the next chapter got too long so hopefully in two chapters this will all be clear. I look forward to getting your thoughts then.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-03-07 - 10:40 pm Title: Five

Okay, I haven't even read this yet I just had to say when I got an e-mail alert that one of my favorite stories had just updated I was so elated I squealed and I was at work. And what's more it's a longgggg chapter! I'm going to print this and read it at work since I have to run errands with my daughter before bedtime. Why oh why must she procrascinate so? Like mother like daughter. *sigh* An overnight field trip she didn't want to go to entails buying muy stuff and running around like crazy. I'll let you know what I think probably tomorrow. I'm so excited!

Author's Response: :) I can't wait! I have a fourteen year old myself. You would think as they get older there would less maintenance, but noooo...

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-03-07 - 01:28 am Title: Five

Great chapter ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I can't wait to read the next chapter so UPDATE SOON.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-02-07 - 03:25 pm Title: Five

I stepped in late in the game on reading this fic, I don' think I discovered it until a few months ago, and here you have been missing three years?????

Your arms must be tired from digging this deep, girl. This was dark, pensive, thoughtful prose. Every character was believable, and the tension between Ororo and Logan made me ache. Good stuff.

Author's Response: Yup. Three years. Was snatched, mind wiped, woke disoriented just recently with a foot surgically implanted in my a$$ to make me finish what I started. ;P Question: Which scene of tension in this chapter are you referring to? I need a sense of whether what's in my head is properly being expressed onto paper.

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