Date: 06-28-06 - 06:02 am Title: Chapter 5
ahhh...i was devistated when i realized this story wasn't complete. i hope hope hope that you will continue it and finish it. i love it and the characterization is right on.
Date: 05-13-06 - 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 5
This is a good start. I am interested to see more...how Logan and Ororo work together without mutant powers. Will there be an update soon???
Date: 07-25-05 - 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 5
I am really enjoying your police spine on all of this. and i have a feeling that it wll only get better...I have an idea who the killer is but will keep that to myself incase i am wrong.
Date: 07-23-05 - 03:03 am Title: Chapter 5
Pari, girl, finally some updates!!! I was beginning to wonder what happened to you! LOL, Logan is such a cynical bitch. Keeping America "pure".... psh, gee, I wonder where he came from? You have to forgive my attitude.... I just hate these arguments. I like the way the story is unfolding, kinda reminds me of Law and Order. Keep it up girl... I can't wait for more!
Date: 07-22-05 - 07:19 am Title: Chapter 5
was short, but thanks. You'v ebeen awefully quite in terms of stories.
Date: 07-22-05 - 07:14 am Title: Chapter 5
Oh snap! An update! :D I don't think it was boring at all. Being that I love shows like Law and Order and CSI, I'm just eating this whole fic up. I could just imagine the horrific scenes you desribed in this chapter. And you just have to love 'Ro for putting Logan in his place about "pure Americans".