Date: 12-31-06 - 03:34 am Title: Prologue
Great story so far.
Date: 07-22-05 - 07:12 am Title: Prologue
holy hell, there's been an update? okay gonna go read it now *Cheeses*
Date: 12-07-04 - 09:17 pm Title: Prologue
I love it Pari!!! I absolutely adore this story... the characterizations are so good and the plot... amazing! keep it up girl!!!!
Date: 08-25-04 - 02:51 pm Title: Prologue
I have read a lot of your stories and you have an amazing ablity to write. Girl you should write a book and get it published!Great job, cannot wait for more. -Dakota
Date: 08-18-04 - 12:57 pm Title: Prologue
First of all, I can't believe ya killed off poor Hank. What my man do to you? LOL! But naah seriously, that story got me hooked. I'm likin the way its developing and it keeps drawing me in. I gotta have more, love. That is some damn good writing and I know it would be. I'd expect no less from my girl.
Date: 08-16-04 - 10:11 pm Title: Prologue
I still say liked it is too weak! Put in a LOVED it thing, please. I LOVE it, it is scary and fast and thrilling and breathless . You write so very well and you have so much passion inside you it leaks out in every thing you write and do. I am not even menacing you, because you will never finish it, but post in X_Friends., please? The link at least. grrrr
Date: 08-16-04 - 10:11 am Title: Prologue
Pari! You killed Hank! You, you... And you started even another story! Ok, I know I shouldn't say anything cause I didn't end any of mine, but... another? Good job, I like it (but I'm a sucker for cop's stories, so...), even if you killed Hank. Poor Hank. *sniff*