Date: 05-06-06 - 03:47 am Title: Chapter 1
Good stuff. I can picture it.
Date: 12-28-05 - 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was an excellent start to a wonderful and beautiful relationship.And by the way the description of what Ororo was doing i would bet she would look wonderful.
Author's Response: Thanks very much, I'm happy I did a great beginning!
Date: 07-01-05 - 07:47 am Title: Chapter 1
oh that was HOT I LIKE THIS. YOU FINDING SOMETHING YUMMY AND WANTING IT
Author's Response: Thanks that is the feeling the chapter is supposed to express.
Date: 10-31-04 - 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
lovely absolutely lovely! such a sweet chapter, sets the stage for such a very promising relationship.... GIVE US MORE!!!!!
Author's Response: *Blush* Thanks very much, I was trying to go for lovely. I'm happy that you're eager.
Date: 10-27-04 - 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
One word...wow!
Author's Response: Thanks I tried to make it, WOW.
Date: 10-02-04 - 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hey, hey! The story is moving on nicely and the plot is developing very well. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thanks Marikosan. I'm glad you think it's coming along well. I'll try to keep it up.
Date: 09-03-04 - 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful! Well worth the wait :)
You really gave a good sense of the movement and flow of the dance. Looking forwards to the next chap hon, M'iko xx
Author's Response: Thanks Marikosan! I'm so happy you liked it!
Date: 09-03-04 - 06:00 am Title: Chapter 1
This was a great start. I would say your first attempt at ROLO is a success. You gave such wonderful detail, it really made me feel as if I was right there with them. Great job again, and keep it coming. :-D
Author's Response: I'm happy you think my first attempt was good! I was a little nervous that it would not be, so thanks a lot! I'll try to update soon.
Date: 09-03-04 - 03:05 am Title: Chapter 1
This Story Was Bitchin To The Highest Level Of Bitchification ROFD. Oh Thats Grimeh Toughie How You Gonna Leave I Cliffy That Just Wrong Lolz Loved The Dancin. I Can Say That This Storeh Is Gettin OutRaGeoUs. It Has That Breath On Me Style From Britney With Ro. Well Ttyl ^.^ Vm P.s. I Know This Is Fic But Small Booties Dont Make A Gay Its The Sexual Experience Lolz J/k But It Really Isn't The Small Booties Its A Guy Thing Lolz Laterzz ^.^ Vm
Author's Response: BBToy, I'm glad you liked it. You know that you are also crazy as well, LOL. I'll try to update soon.