Great chapter ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I can't wait to read the next chapter so UPDATE SOON.


Author's Response: Thanks so much hope rto give you more soon, I've just been outta it.

I absolutely love thi story!! Don't know why no reviews on written on this! It portrays Ororo and Logan well, right on the mark! Where is the rest of the story! More more!!

Author's Response: Thanks I appreciate that, Imma try to come back soon.

Logan knows sooner or later Ororo will tell him what is going on, so he can help her because he cares for her so much. And who this is that this powerful and beautifrul woman is so terrified of and what it was that he did to hurt her so bad. So he can help her stop him once and for all.

Author's Response: You'll just have to wait and find out. Don't worry things will be revealed soon. Thanks for another review.

I haven’t come here in a long time and I hardly ever log in anymore when I review but today’s your lucky day. I remember reading this on fanfiction.net and thinking this story was badly written and giving you constructive criticism which you took like a big baby going off to cry to mommy but I've read through this now and can see you've gotten better. You aren't over describing things now which is a relief but you have a lot of mistakes that a beta could maybe help you with. There’re two things I didn’t like about it and one was that Rory is a weird nickname to me cause there’s a Rory who used to be in Excalibur, a dude, and Logan kept calling her name all the time when real life people don’t do that but that’s being picky. The 2nd thing was Rogue saying Ah see ya’ll later Logan,” which if you decipher it would mean I see you all later, Logan which makes no sense unless she’s illiterate. Some things I didn’t understand at all like what the way you used doughtily which didn’t make any sense in that sentence and what is a grimme? And who says ya twos? So maybe I’m just not worldly enough to know the meanings and that would be on me but other than that the story has improved with each chapter. I know you won’t think this is a nice review but I couldn’t resist telling you what I thought when I found this story again but whatever. Would I recommend this story? Maybe but I wouldn't not recommend it at this point.

Author's Response: Well, hello Nienna. Didn't expect to see you pop up. Still think I was a baby about everything, huh? You seem to still have a little grudge about it too. Well I'm still sorry you see it like that, I just saw it as defending myself, not "running to Mommy" as you put it, but whatever. It's nice that you think I improved, so thank you. And with all my terms you pointed out, they are slang terms that people use often. Maybe you have never herd people talk like that, but I have (and of all walks of life too). So again, thanks for stopping by and reviewing.

very exciting! keep going please

Author's Response: I will keep going, you don't have to worry about that.