wow. I have a lot to say about this story. First of al it is really well written and I like your style a lot. It's very believable and surely not ameture. Um, I can tell that we have a Jean-hater here, (:-P) I don't know if I actually like your portrayl of Jean here, it's very bratty, snotty, blonde cheerleader bitch type, and I don't think Jean is like that at all. Also, her relationship with Logan isn't very true to the storyline. Besides that, eveything else is fabulous. I like Ororo's character a lot, and there is certainly some mystery about her that intrigues me. So far...this is very, very good.

That was an excellent chapter,real emotion between Logan and Ororo that could grow into something special. And great action i liked it alot.

I love this story. I was sitting in my boring ass summer class thinkin about this fic, and I check out the page, and not one, but two chapters that I haven't read yet. Aaah a great day. By the way I don't trust the professor, whats he up to? I love that you're using the ultimate universe characters. I love ultimate. Keep up the good work

Author's Response: I like the Ultimate characters too, although not the plot lines of that verse, so I probably won't include anything other than the characters, which too me are sooo kickass. Besides, I tend to run off the main track in my writings anyway, so who knows what 'll be coming. :) I hope you stick around to find out, and THANK YOU!! for reviewing, I really appreciate it!!

A natural born leader baby! Become team leader and get the hot guy? No contest! This was real good windrider! I'm hanging on every word,syllable and letter! Bring it baby!

Author's Response: Oh, I'll bring it! ::laughs:: (What exactly is 'it' that I am bringing?) ::tease::