[Report This]Date: 01-06-12 - 10:25 pm Title: Revelations
I died laughing when Wolverine said Nightcrawler was his mother. I'm really enjoying this story. It's hard to review and like because of the security code.
[Report This]Date: 12-28-06 - 02:11 am Title: Revelations
WOW...
God, I wish this had been a real comic...
[Report This]Date: 01-11-06 - 03:30 am Title: Revelations
Will Logan be able to forgive himself for what he did to Ororo? And will Ororo and Logan admit there love for each other?
[Report This]Date: 06-27-05 - 05:31 am Title: Revelations
You could feel action and drama in this story. Storm is amazing woman and Logan is her perfect mate. I only wish the comic book writers would ask you to write for them. As long as they keep within your story.
[Report This]Date: 06-19-05 - 11:12 pm Title: Revelations
*Grr* Woman, would you get yourself a job at Marvel already!? Here's the Career link http://www.marvel.com/company/careers.htm
Now, switch schools and go get yourself an internship. :P ;)
Author's Response: Hahaha. As much as I'd love to work for Marvel, I'm no where near good enough...besides i like writing for a select few... :) But thank you for thinking I am!!
[Report This]Date: 06-19-05 - 03:00 pm Title: Revelations
We want MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You know you the Girl! Another great chapter. :D
Author's Response: Awww shucks... More on the way, minah!! More on the way! :)
[Report This]Date: 06-19-05 - 02:49 pm Title: Revelations
MMMMMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(Where's Shinobi? I know he's not Goin to let her slide!)
Author's Response: No Shinobi is most definitely not going to let Ro slide. He'll be re-entering the story in the next chapter or two... More on the way Mary and thanks for reviewing!! I love how involved you are!! ::grins::
[Report This]Date: 06-19-05 - 02:05 pm Title: Revelations
and oh i forgot i wanted to say i really liked what you did with storm's history. that was good. and that whole scene was excellent :D
Author's Response: Again, thank you. i like tweaking with the characters a bit, and I'm glad you like it!!
[Report This]Date: 06-19-05 - 02:03 pm Title: Revelations
that was a vERY good read. totally action packed and extremely captivating. NEXT!!! :)
Author's Response: thank you! Next is in the works, nickel!! :) Keep an eye out...
[Report This]Date: 06-19-05 - 12:48 pm Title: Revelations
Well i'm back early! :D Just in time for this fantastic update! Really cool chapter! On ething though: Storm's parents were killed when she was 6 moths old by a bomb who crashed the building. And i think you need a beta reader to creect some of the spelling mistakes. Anyhow awsome stuff!
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, I know how Storm's parents were killed in the comics, but this is fanfic ::wink:: and so far I haven't stayed 100% true to cannon anyway, so... Since I usually write in my sapre time it's done rather hastily, but I'll start proofing for ya! :) C-ya and thanks again for the review.
[Report This]Date: 06-19-05 - 06:12 am Title: Revelations
Action packed chapter windrider1 and revelations indeed! Storm is such a multi-faceted character in this story! You write her so well it's kind of creepy but in a GOOD WAY! You've taken Wolverine to heights i've yet to see in other Ro/Lo! Feral, sexy and oh so DIRTY but in a GOOD WAY! Cyclops still has a stick in his ASS and SPINE! As for Jean,I'll qoute my boyfriend: "Ho's get paid,sluts get laid!" My only question is: What is up with "WHEELS"? I read your response in a review and you said "Charles is not the benevolent leader we all know." Are you making him toe the line between good/evil or is he an out and out bady guy yet to be discovered? I will stay tuned!
Author's Response: Xavier is definitely smudging the line betweeen good and evil, but as of yet he's not an out and out baddy. Just a very ambitious man, slightly blinded by his ideals, willing to do whatever it takes to reach his goal. (I repeat: Whatever it takes)
Don't expect the stick to be pulled out anytime soon, there's a lot of resentment towards Storm's seemingly preferential treatment, as well as lingering jealousy between the four of them, so watch for sparks ::wink:: Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 06-19-05 - 05:25 am Title: Revelations
Wow. I love the twist you gave to the death of Ororo's parents. Very orginal. I don't believe anyone has ever done that before...not that I know of anyway. I can't wait to read Logan's reaction to 'Ro's confession. I know you'll make it good. ::wink::
Author's Response: I don't think it's been done before either, and there is more of 'Ro's past yet to be revealed. I hope you like the other twists I add to the story as well. :)
[Report This]Date: 06-19-05 - 05:06 am Title: Revelations
Wow, I just realized I'd never reviewed this story!! Well, just to let you know that I HAVE been reading it and I HAVE been enjoying it. This Storm is just fascinating. I absolutely love that you can write her so well two completely different ways. Congrats on another excellent story :D
Author's Response: Thanks. Yeah, I was wondering where you were ::tease::
I think there are many facets of Storm and she gives me plenty to work with.
I expect more reviews from you charmer! ;)
[Report This]Date: 06-19-05 - 04:50 am Title: Revelations
That chapter was really great. It took a while but I'm glad Ororo snapped Logan out of it. Some real deep stuff. I can't believe that Ororo opened up that part of her life with him. but it was needed. Update A.S.A.P.
Author's Response: Your absolutely right, it was needed to start that bond between them. I'll update soon, promise! :)
[Report This]Date: 06-19-05 - 02:41 am Title: Revelations
plz hurry and post another part
Author's Response: Okay!! :)
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