This story is Freakin AWESOME!!!

I wish Storm would've bitch slap, stomped, then fried Jean's dumb ass. I can't stand that thirsty broad XD

I hope Storm will be okay.

Okay, to all the powers that be, namely the moderators, forgive my French... What the f**k was that b***h-a** hoe thinking when she was screwing with Storm's mind. And to think Logan defended that useless b***h. You know when the glass was flying, I was hoping deep down that she got hurt. Girl you are amazing; you made me feel an almost undefinable (if that's a word) amount of anger and resentment towards that red-headed cow. I know Shaw is quite the baddie but he's beginning to seem like a better prospect in comparison to that moronic a**hole named Logan. ::releases long held breath:: I know Xavier's a piece of sh*t but I think he should kick Jean's ass and he has reason to seeing as how she's messing with his prized thief. And I am going to stop ranting now. I think this is my longest review ever and I haven't even complemented your wondrous, magnificent, amazing, stupendous talents/abilities/God-given gifts. I love your stories and I absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: ::Blushing profusely:: Man, ya know how to make me smile and want to get cracking on the next chapter, just to read another of your reviews!! Xavier isn't blind to Jean, and Logan, well, he's in an awkward situation...in love with one woman, knocked up another...::Sigh:: Oh, whatever will he do? ::Grins:: More on the way!!

Okay taht was just my first inpresion: now to take things apart. Shinobi is getting too good. You want us to like him don't you? You're even worse than the Profesor! I still don't like him, it's an act and i can see it. He wants storm like a hunter wants a big reindeer head above his fireplace. It smells bad. Wolverne LOVES Sorm, but he threaens her with his claws and does NOTHING to Jean, and doesn't even let teh profesor have a talk to with her?!??!?!? What is he thinking?!?! While threatenng Stormy is perfectly clear, defending jean is NOT!!! And i still think Jean is lying. Either she's not pregnant or it's someone else's baby. Not Scott's. Maybe Warren's? Or some ther boy from the school. Maybe even Shinobi's. That would make a good twist. The Profesor is back in my graces today :D Oh, and where are Scott and Beast off to? Something smells fishy there aswll. "An' the nose don't lie, bub" I ABSOLUTELY love this story. And i';m so happy you update everyday, but i still can't help wanting more!!!

Author's Response: You're a clever one, BP... Wolverine was protecting his kid, which as we know, he gets a little carried away with...(he's an idiot sometimes) I'm so glad you love the story, you are one of the muses that keep me going. More on the way!! :)

TERRIFIC CHAPTER! Where do I begin? First off let me say that I realize Jean is pregnant or something, but can you let Storm Pound on her just a little? Please? She is such a bitch! I can’t believe she said that to Kurt. I’m frikkin outraged ova hea! You’re writing is so clear that I can see everything happening in my head. I love your interactions between Ali and Gambit. Like when he cuts his eyes at her for saying something. That’s so great. You have me completely invested in each and every one of these characters, and I am one of those Storm fans who shrinks away from anything having to do with other characters like I’m allergic. Xavier is just so dark. He’s damn scary in this fic.Wolverine pulling his claws on Ororo was kind of understandable. After all she was threatening his “family”. That incident should push Ororo closer to Shaw. :) I like Shinobi a lot. He is Deliciously Evil. That’s what I’ll call him. And hey, what’s this about Scott and Beast being off somewhere?

Author's Response: Scott and Beast will be returnng soon, and new developements will occur on their arrival. Also, yes Shinobi is deliciously evil, and quite persistent in his pursuit of Storm. I don't think he's gonna go anywhere anytime soon... and that may be just the spark to light a fire under Wolverine's a$$. I'm glad you like the characters, I'm also one of those people that are usually "Not Storm, dn't care.", but writing them has been really fun (Espescially Ali and Remy.) :) Thanks for the review!!! :D

Oooooooooh! That little Bitch! Jean got it coming for sure (Which would me in the next chapter. Hint, Hint). I know wolverine was thinking about the baby, It's makes sense that he would be protective, but damit! Now was storm telling Gambit don't let the professor in her head or maybe you are going to throw in the Shadow King :) Love it! On to some more drama.

Author's Response: Hint well taken, minah! :) Plenty more drama on the way!! I love that ya review!! You keep me wanting to write more, so thanks!!

I don't think I can really comment right now...I am so pissed. But don't worry, I still absolutely love it, I just need a moment to process this chapter. I want to kill that red-headed you-know-what. You are so good, please update soon...please!!!

Author's Response: Ok, James Girl, I will update soon. Pissed? Sorry...wait, no, no I'm not... ;) Thanks for the inspiration!!

That BITCH!!!!! That horrible, wretched slag of a BITCH!!! Grrrrrr one minute I'm yelling at Jean, then I'm crying over Ro's memories of her mum, and now my face is beet red I'm so pissed at Jean. Bitchbitchbitch. *ahem* On another note...Um...is it sad that Shinobi's starting to seem a LITTLE less creepy? Still somewhat gross but not as creepy...Or maybe that's how we're supposed to feel. It's just a ploy to make us trust him. UGH!!! Stupid Jean. I'm even angry with Wolverine right now!!! Errrrrr. *sigh* Great job, per usual. :D

Author's Response: Whoa, Charmer... Vent much? ::laughing:: Ploy? Me use a ploy? *gasp* Thanks for the kind..uh...words, :D I'll be writing more today, so be on the lookout. :)