Jean is such a BITCH!!!!!! She just had to tread on ground that she has no real idea about!!! Mind you Storm is one of the most powerful mutants on the face of the planet!!! If she really wanted or even if she didn't she could destroy the whole Earth!!! But no, stupid Jean had to be a stupid bitch!!! This was a great chapter!!! I can't wait to see how Xavier explains Storm's relentless power!!!!! So please update A.S.A.P.

Author's Response: Update coming, Tough Spirit!! Yes, Jean is a bitch, and yes Storm is one of the most powerful mutants on the planet!! Jean's not free and clear anytime soon... :) Thanks for the review!!!

My Goodness i felt so out of the loop, i had some serious catching up to do with the chapters but it was well worth it! First, i don't think Jean is pregnant she just running some type of game and if i was Storm i'd push her down a flight of stairs or send some electrical currents through her ass to let her know that the games shut down. Second, i don't know...i have to give it up for Shinobi, i know the dude is supposedly bad and creepy but atleast he's honest with his whole intensions. Whats more romantic than a guy straight out telling you i want you and i ain't gonna stop 'til i have you? Gotta love the whole stalker-esque quality to the guy. Oh, and Wolvie grabbing Storm's hair and putting his claws to her (throat? i forget.) i don't care how in love Storm think she is, there would have been no warning just a straight up lightening bolt cracking his skull open. But i see its about to get really dramatic...is that foreshadowing of the Shadow King i smell?::Sniffs::: Yep, i think it is! As always great chapter, love the story. I've added your stories to my favorites list and everytime one is updated the email for some reason gets sent straight to my junk inbox. Let me just say i've never been so excited to wade through the junk mail because i know somewhere in there is one of your hidden treasures just being awaited to be read!

Author's Response: Hey, I was wondering where you were ::Grins:: Shinobi is a bad and creepy, but your right, there's something about him... :) Shadow King....Mmmmaybeee... I hope to have more updated soon, but my internet keeps flitting out on me, so bear with me :)

okay, catching up to the rest of the world now........ Very much back to my original thought of putting Jean on a leash. With a shock collar. And some inward spikes. Great chapter all the way. As for the last part........umm, wow! Didn't see that coming! Good job!

Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words!! I hope to update soon, so stay tuned!!