Do you know much money I would pay to see Storm beat the dog shit of Jean like this in a movie??!!!! A hella lot!! Lol! That was glorious to read. I just wish there was more ass kicking XD

Holy Cow!! Now THAT'S what i call a "Classic Beatdown Scene"!!! And the way Chuckles just let Jean get her come-uppance?? Bea-u-ti-ful!! Ro beating the shit outta Jean is almost as satisfying as reading about Ro & Lo gettin' together, lol!

Can I watch too?!?!? ::jumps ups and down:: LOL!!! I LOVE YOU!!!! You are the WOMAN!!!! Now, where's Wolvie? Oh man!! Ro beat that sniveling bitch up nicely!!! She's such a good person because in that state of mind, I would not be so forgiving and compassionate. Amazing amazing amazing!!!

WONDERFUL!!!! hahahahaha I noticed your grinning author's note and thought "ooohh we're in for quite a ride with this chapter" and I was sooo right. At first, I actually felt bad for Jean. I mean, I hate her and all, but no one deserves to lose a child. And then you worked your magic and threw a curveball. YES! omg, I can't get over how kickass Storm was! And Ali? man, that girl is hilarious...I can't wait until Jean tells Wolverine...should be an interesting chapter, eh?

Author's Response: Ali is fast becoming a favorite of mine. She's just waht Ro needs. Jean's not stupid, she won't tell Logan in person, but she will tell him, and there will be consequences. :) Thanks for the review, Charmer!! Off to write more.

That's it?!?! After all she's done, that's it?!?!?!? I hope Logan will get a good piece of her too. I like Alison more and more. I loved the last line. I'd like to watch too. I wonder when Wolvie's coming back. Oh and speaking of smackdowns i'd like to smack Shinobi's ass(and the rest of him) outa the solar sistem. He's such a jerk underneath all that sweet lets-charm-storm face. Can't wait for more!!!!

Oh! You are so good at this.

Author's Response: Thank you!!! :)

Unbe-frikkin-leivable! She deserved every last bit of that ass whoopin'. The girl has some serious problems. When Wolverine comes back there are going to be some consequences and repercussions. But please don't let him off that easily. He has to suffer for not choosing the right side, and for being a complete jerk.

Author's Response: He'll have to play catch up with Shinobi when he comes home that's for sure. :D And Jean will be on his $**t list for a loooong time. more on the way!!

This chapter was BANGING!!!!!!!!!! Jean just had to be the stupid one, the stupid bitch! I mean what was she thinking! That's why Ororo had to kick her ass!!!!!!! And Ororo is such a person that she actually holds the stupid bitch!!!!!! I can't wait for Logan to come back!!!!!! I hope he curses the bitch out!!!!!!! I am also very desperate for some serious rolo!!!! So please let me see rolo!!!! Update A.S.A.P.

Author's Response: ::Grinning:: Yes, Ro is a badass, but also a genuine good guy and therefore doesn't harbor hatred (although don't expect friendship any time soon between those two...) Serious Ro/Lo?...Well, your wish is my command...just be a little bit patient... :) BTW thanks again for the update!! Loved it!!