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Reviewer: elanda1973 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-08-05 - 12:02 am Title: The Talk

That was deep! Logan on his knees?Damn!I want to see what else he'll drop to his knees for!MORE,MORE,MORE,MORE!

Author's Response: With Storm, he'll get down on his knees and do a lot of things. (LOL) Keep reading and I'll keep writing!! :D

Reviewer: LaydeRogue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-07-05 - 11:46 pm Title: The Talk

*Whew*! Yet another amazing chapter. Pardon my ghettoness, but i really thought it was about to get "crunked" btw. Storm and Viper. See i knew Storm could hold her own. Viper must be on some serious ish if she thought she could take on the Windrider and win.!

Author's Response: Yeah, Viper's a little psychotic, and quite the pain in the ass. Don't worry, our Ro won't stand for it. :) Hope you like where this one goes. :D

Reviewer: thewindrider278 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-07-05 - 09:59 pm Title: The Talk

OUCH!!!! I think I'm bleeding with that last remark. Amazing chapter, yet depressing on so many levels...... :-( What's gonna happen next? I can't guess a direction. Where's Xavier? How could Wolvie screw that b***h? Why did she ask him to marry her? Will anyone else show up at the mansion? Where's Sabertooth and Mystique? How are Remy and Rogue? What does Ro's hair look like now? Get crackin' missy.... you're gonna have to write a couple of chapters to answer my questions!!! :-D

Author's Response: Wow, that's a lot of questions. All of which will be answered, hopefully to your satsfaction ;) As for how Wolvie could screw that bi**h, well first he has to be aroused, then he has to insert... well, I think you know where I'm gonig with this. If it eases you at all, it was only once and he couldn't finish. That'll be adressed later, but you got the heads up. :)

Reviewer: JamesGirl0512 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-07-05 - 09:57 pm Title: The Talk

You know you have me in agony right now. I hate to see them like this, especially since they are both really hurting. But I will trust in your skillful pen...you haven't steered my wrong so far. LOL.

Author's Response: Sorry for the agony. I did say in big letters to buckle up, remeber ;) I think we know I love them together to keep them apart for toooo long... haha. Keep reading, I hopefully won't let you down.

Reviewer: Nesha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-07-05 - 07:21 pm Title: Meet the Wife

Windrider you are a greqat talented person who has kept me on my toes during the other fic and now through this one, keep doing it, I love them.

Author's Response: Thank you!! It makes it so worth writing to know they are read and enjoyed! Happy Reading! Keep reviewing! ;)

Reviewer: JamesGirl0512 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-07-05 - 03:29 am Title: Meet the Wife

I am very disappointed. Do you want to know why? It's because there are not more chapters to read!!!! I have been reading this story all weekend, in between writing a paper on ethics, and finally I reach the latest chapter...now you might think this would make me happy, but alas it does not. I need answers, and I need them now...what was Logan thinking....Viper?!? He better have a very good reason, or I may have to kill him myself. You are F-A-N-T-A-S-T-I-C, by the end of the chapter my face was practically flush with the computer screen. Seriously. Awesome, awesome work...as usual. LOL.

Author's Response: ::Blushing:: He has a reason, how good it is depends on your POV... Thanks fro the flattering words, keeps my ego nice and happy (lol) and my fingers a-typing!!

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-06-05 - 05:11 pm Title: Meet the Wife

Poor Storm! Poor poor Storm! I can't wait till the moment they get to talk to ach other. If i hadn't read Viper's bio i'd woul have prolly been mad at you. But i soo can't wait for your update! I love your story! It's just addictive.

Author's Response: Ahha, doing a little research, eh? I'll update soon, promise! :)

Reviewer: serial_charmer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-06-05 - 03:55 am Title: Meet the Wife

Oh man. So there was a bargain of some sort, right? No way would Wolvie marry Viper because he...[oh gag me...I can barely say it...] LOVED ... her. He's gotta have a good reason! Can't wait to read what it is... :D

Author's Response: You're so clever... :D ::Laughing:: No-absolutely no- he does not love Viper.

Reviewer: serial_charmer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-06-05 - 03:37 am Title: Meet the Wife

VIPER!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! HOLY CRAP!!! I haven't even read the chapter yet, I just read "Viper" and HAD to review immediately... Alright, I'm off to read the rest haha

Author's Response: Viper. Yep. :)

Reviewer: thewindrider278 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-06-05 - 03:29 am Title: Meet the Wife

I don't think any answer he could possibly give could justify his actions and rest her grief. She endured hell for 2 years with the sole consolation being Logan. She came back to earth for him only to find him married to another woman. That is total betrayal. Makes Remy look a hell of a lot better than him. I am entirely disgusted with Logan right now and I am sure you'll manage to throw some curve ball into the picture to make me reconsider my feelings... please do!! That guarentees me another chapter!!!! :-D

Author's Response: Wow, you nailed it! You should be disgusted with Logan and feel for 'Ro. She did endure two years of hell, only to find her man married, nu t wait...what's that I see ahead? Is that a curve? A twist? a Turn? Hahaha. :) See you on the next!! Thanks Again!! You definitely make me want to keep it going!

Reviewer: elanda1973 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-06-05 - 03:09 am Title: Meet the Wife

Holy Shit Balls! What is going on? I need more! I need answers!But until then one hot sex scene between Wolverine/Storm just might make the voices in my head stop screaming!

Author's Response: Aside from one other person I have never known anyone else to use the expression 'Holy Shit Balls' ! That's perfect! I'll do my best to quiet those voices! ( I rather like the ones in my head, but eh...to each their own ) ;)

Reviewer: LaydeRogue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-06-05 - 02:45 am Title: Meet the Wife

Hot Dayum...the shit has hit the fan and i'm loving every bit of the scandalous mess.

Author's Response: ::Laughing:: Me too!

Reviewer: Sherlock Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-05-05 - 05:34 pm Title: The Return

You are a witch. An evil, Wicked, Coniving, Brilliant witch and I love every word you write. I was ready to broil you over a slow flame. I was depressed, angry and awed at your story telling. I was going to go home, kick the cat and break something and then you throw us a lifeline. What kind of a mind is it that can devise this kind of torture. You are a witch

Author's Response: ::Cackeling Insanely:: Uh, thanks... I think :D I like the fact that you were emotionally invested enough to want to do bodily harm to your feline! I hope you enjoy the rest as well! See ya on the next!

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-05-05 - 04:56 pm Title: The Return

2 years?!?!?!?!?!?!?! WOW! That's a LOT! And husband??!?!?!? Whoose husband??!!? Wolvie's? no WAY! Don't do that to Storm! Eagerly waiting for your update!

Author's Response: Yep, Wolvie's married...I know it's not fair, but much like the situation with Gambit one must have a little faith... :)

Reviewer: minah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-05-05 - 04:06 pm Title: The Return

Okay! I don't care what you have to do, but PLeaaaassssssssse fix this! Did that hussy say Wolvie was her husband. Nooooooooooooo! I actually screamed this out load. Great job :D

Author's Response: ::laughing:: Out loud? Nice. Yes, she did say that he was her husband...hmm... quiet a little pickle no?

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