Date: 10-26-05 - 06:55 am Title: Chapter Three: Windrider
Very natural. Very good.
Date: 08-27-05 - 01:58 pm Title: Chapter Three: Windrider
Great character development and interactions in this chapter. Your description of Ororo's windriding and communing with the storm was marvelous. I love the imagery and depth of emotion that it evoked. You have quite a way with words. Thanks for a truly wonderful chapter!
Date: 07-22-05 - 02:26 pm Title: Chapter Three: Windrider
a great read!
Date: 07-12-05 - 10:57 pm Title: Chapter Three: Windrider
This was a chapter that was not to disappoint ^.^ I really liked how Logan was beginning to care for her more and more, thought that was sweet :) Can't wait for the next update!
Date: 07-12-05 - 08:48 pm Title: Chapter Three: Windrider
You are a mind reader. I was just thinking about this story, and here you go with an update. Can you see what I'm thinking now...that's right, I want another update, and soon. LOL. This is really great. I can already tell this is going to be one of my favorite stories. :::smiles:::
Date: 07-12-05 - 04:57 pm Title: Chapter Three: Windrider
MMMMMMMOOOOOOORRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!
Date: 07-12-05 - 01:45 pm Title: Chapter Three: Windrider
I like how you have Storm and Wolverine build a slow bond together. Great update, can't wait for the next. :D
Date: 07-12-05 - 11:13 am Title: Chapter Three: Windrider
Great update, a very strong and tangible bond forming between Logan an 'Ro. Nice. He can see why? I just bet he can see why. I really enjoyed the commradery and companionship you have here, as well as the overall feel. Great insight into Ororo. :) Bravo! Now, go write more!!
Date: 07-12-05 - 06:48 am Title: Chapter Three: Windrider
very nice this is turning into one of the best storys i have read plz post more soon
Date: 07-12-05 - 06:37 am Title: Chapter Three: Windrider
Please update soon...I like the way Logan's feelings are developing and would like to see what happens when ororo comes to know about them. Maybe you could tell us about her's in the next chapter.