Well, things are certainly getting more interesting! Loved the characterizations of Logan as teasing friend and overprotective big brother. Oftentimes, he's portrayed rather one-dimensionally, so I love the different facets you've incorporated here. Now on to the mission to Alkali Lake!

Hey I just emailed you about this story yesterday. I was thinking about it...I missed it. :-) I'm happy to see you updated. I really enjoy this story, you have a real talent with words! Now I'm off to read the next chapter, I sense somone is about to make a comeback. :::grins:::