Date: 08-27-05 - 03:26 pm Title: Chapter Six: Irrational
The plot thickens! I really like the approach that you've taken in building Ororo and Logan's relationship. Loved Logan's reaction to her "challenge." And poor Scott! With all that tension in that mansion, something's gotta give. And soon. Thanks for another wonderfully written chapter.
Date: 08-27-05 - 01:43 am Title: Chapter Six: Irrational
That's right Logan, no more Jean...it's 'Ro's time now. LOL. Still absolutely lovin' this story. Keep up the MARVELous work. Can't wait to get to the RoLo loving that I know you have in store for us. I love your portrayal of the characters, it's very real. I love the idea that they don't fall head-over-heels for each other right away...they are taking their time getting to that point, but you can absolutely see it coming. Again, I really love it!
Date: 08-26-05 - 07:36 pm Title: Chapter Six: Irrational
You will elaborate on the choice he made right?
Date: 08-26-05 - 12:03 pm Title: Chapter Six: Irrational
More!!
Date: 08-26-05 - 11:23 am Title: Chapter Six: Irrational
Nice ending.....and the *challange*....build up on that!! Looking forward to the next update.