Date: 02-17-12 - 02:24 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Three: Ororo Wakes
This was possibly the best Rolo fic I have ever read. I liked their personalities. I liked the plot twists. I especially loved that Scott and Jean were not made extremely unlikable. I laughed when Storm said she didn't need a protector and the next chapter was titled "Protector". The romance went at a good pace and was not forced. :) I'm so glad I clicked this story. It would have been on the last chapter, but it wouldn't let me.
Date: 11-28-05 - 03:43 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Three: Ororo Wakes
dude. you have to update this man.
Date: 11-02-05 - 09:49 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three: Ororo Wakes
Those guys really must hate Ro... Good thing she had Rogue at her side to protect her and that she's back at the mansion now. But I'm wondering if she really is so much safer there... They seem to be everywhere. I hope Logan and the others are alright and kicking some ass! They should return to the mansion though... somehow I got the feeling they'll be needed there soon. But maybe that's just me being paranoid *lol* ;)
Date: 10-30-05 - 09:18 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three: Ororo Wakes
i gotta say this chapter was a nice one... a little corny at one time- that whole Jean and Ororo i love you bit- but i guess for their relationship it works. ;)
Date: 10-29-05 - 10:12 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three: Ororo Wakes
Wow. Emotionally jarring and turbulent. I can't wait to find out what's going on with Logan and why these people want Ro so bad. Update soon.